What I Said:

Today was Saturday, but I couldn’t relax to have a rest. Because all in my mind was the Jira plugin application development. Finally, I completed a first version which could be shown to Max, resolved the biggest pain point of her. About two days efforts, many difficulties, but I took them one by one. I decided to record a screenshot video to Max at next week.

ChatGPT’s Revision:

Today was Saturday, but I couldn’t relax or rest because all I could think about was the Jira plugin development. Finally, I completed the first version, which I can now show to Max. It resolved her biggest pain point. It took about two days of effort and many challenges, but I tackled them one by one. Next week, I plan to record a screenshot video to share with Max.

Fixes and Explanations:

  • “Today was Saturday, but I couldn’t relax to have a rest” → “Today was Saturday, but I couldn’t relax or rest”

    Simplified phrasing for better readability.

  • “Because all in my mind was the Jira plugin application development” → “because all I could think about was the Jira plugin development”

    Smoothed the sentence for natural flow.

  • “Finally, I completed a first version which could be shown to Max, resolved the biggest pain point of her” → “Finally, I completed the first version, which I can now show to Max. It resolved her biggest pain point”

    Reorganized for clarity and corrected “pain point of her” to “her biggest pain point.”

  • “About two days efforts, many difficulties, but I took them one by one” → “It took about two days of effort and many challenges, but I tackled them one by one”

    Adjusted for grammatical accuracy and natural phrasing.

  • “I decided to record a screenshot video to Max at next week” → “Next week, I plan to record a screenshot video to share with Max”

    Rephrased for better grammar and flow.