What I Said:

Max, a friend of mine who are working on manufactory industry as a project manager for many years, asked me about how to manager IPD project in Jira for a few times. In fact due to I was not familiar with IPD, so we could deep dive into this topic every time. This time I overview learned IPD and got its history, and I decided to talk with Max one more time. We showed me some good points on other products, and asked me if these features might be supported on Jira. After discussion I realized that we need to add some small features to cross IPD project management. Let’s get started.

ChatGPT’s Revision:

Max, a friend of mine who has been working in the manufacturing industry as a project manager for many years, has asked me several times how to manage IPD projects in Jira. Since I wasn’t familiar with IPD, we’ve had to explore the topic together every time. This time, I took some time to learn about IPD and its history, so I decided to talk to Max again. She showed me some great features in other tools and asked if Jira could support them. After our discussion, I realized we’ll need to add a few small features to handle cross-IPD project management. Let’s get started!

Fixes and Explanations:

  • “Max, a friend of mine who are working on manufactory industry” → “Max, a friend of mine who has been working in the manufacturing industry”

    Corrected “are” to “has been” for proper tense and adjusted “manufactory” to “manufacturing” for accuracy.

  • “asked me about how to manager IPD project in Jira for a few times” → “has asked me several times how to manage IPD projects in Jira”

    Simplified phrasing and corrected “manager” to “manage.”

  • “In fact due to I was not familiar with IPD, so we could deep dive into this topic every time” → “Since I wasn’t familiar with IPD, we’ve had to explore the topic together every time”

    Rephrased for clarity and fluency.

  • “This time I overview learned IPD and got its history” → “This time, I took some time to learn about IPD and its history”

    Rephrased “overview learned” to “took some time to learn” for smoother expression.

  • “We showed me some good points on other products, and asked me if these features might be supported on Jira” → “He showed me some great features in other tools and asked if Jira could support them”

    Adjusted “we” to “he” for grammatical accuracy and replaced “good points” with “great features.”

  • “After discussion I realized that we need to add some small features to cross IPD project management” → “After our discussion, I realized we’ll need to add a few small features to handle cross-IPD project management”

    Rephrased for clarity and fluency.