What I Said:

I booked a meeting with a company at 2:30 pm. I went to the company and discussed about the digitalization for the company. I proposed some solutions based on Jira/Confluence. Because it is an internal company, and their ERP implementation still in a very begin phase. It would be great for these kind of 0 level digitalization companies. Jira wouldn’t challenge ERP, it would improve ERP implementation, because Jira is very useful to track task management and issue management. I know this company owner for over 6 or 7 years. But past one year we started to talk about our business.

ChatGPT’s Revision:

I had a meeting with a company at 2:30 PM to discuss their digitalization needs. I proposed some solutions using Jira and Confluence since they’re still in the early stages of ERP implementation. For companies at this ‘0-level’ of digitalization, Jira can complement ERP by improving task and issue management, not replacing it. I’ve known the company owner for over 6 or 7 years, but it’s only in the past year that we started discussing business opportunities.”

Fixes and Explanations:

  • “I booked a meeting with a company at 2:30 pm” → “I had a meeting with a company at 2:30 PM”

    “Had a meeting” flows better and is more direct.

  • “I went to the company and discussed about the digitalization for the company” → “to discuss their digitalization needs”

    Simplified and removed repetitive phrasing.

  • “Because it is an internal company, and their ERP implementation still in a very begin phase” → “since they’re still in the early stages of ERP implementation”

    Adjusted grammar (“very begin phase” → “early stages”) for clarity.

  • “It would be great for these kind of 0 level digitalization companies” → “For companies at this ‘0-level’ of digitalization”

    Rephrased for smoother phrasing and better grammar.

  • “Jira wouldn’t challenge ERP, it would improve ERP implementation” → “Jira can complement ERP by improving task and issue management, not replacing it”

    “Complement” is more precise and professional.

  • “I know this company owner for over 6 or 7 years. But past one year we started to talk about our business” → “I’ve known the company owner for over 6 or 7 years, but it’s only in the past year that we started discussing business opportunities”

    Corrected tense and rephrased for fluency.