What I Said:

Added an entrepreneur WeChat who focus on international labor services industry. His company is in our hometown. We exchanged our recently condition each other. He told me that economy condition wasn’t great these years, but lucky thing is they still have some stable regular clients. I wasn’t able to ensure how much real from his speaking. Whatever I changed my plan from discussing business to telling him that I focus on manufacturing industry. And I would go and see him if I could get some business opportunities in our hometown. To made him relax to avoid worry about my business request.

ChatGPT’s Revision:

I added an entrepreneur on WeChat who focuses on the international labor services industry. His company is based in our hometown. We exchanged updates about our recent situations. He mentioned that the economic conditions haven’t been great these past few years, but luckily, they still have some stable regular clients. I wasn’t sure how much of what he said was entirely true, but I decided to shift the conversation from discussing business to mentioning that I focus on the manufacturing industry. I told him I’d visit him if I found business opportunities in our hometown—just to make him feel at ease and not worry about any immediate business requests.

Fixes and Explanations:

  • “Added a boss WeChat who focus on international labor services industry” → “I added an entrepreneur on WeChat who focuses on the international labor services industry”

    Replaced “boss” with “entrepreneur” for a more appropriate term and adjusted grammar for clarity.

  • “We exchanged our recently condition each other” → “We exchanged updates about our recent situations”

    Rephrased for natural and fluent expression.

  • “He told me that economy condition wasn’t great these years, but lucky thing is they still have some stable regular clients” → “He mentioned that the economic conditions haven’t been great these past few years, but luckily, they still have some stable regular clients”

    Adjusted for grammatical correctness and smoother phrasing.

  • “I wasn’t able to ensure how much real from his speaking” → “I wasn’t sure how much of what he said was entirely true”

    Simplified and rephrased for clarity.

  • “Whatever I changed my plan from discussing business to telling him that I focus on manufacturing industry” → “I decided to shift the conversation from discussing business to mentioning that I focus on the manufacturing industry”

    Rephrased for clarity and grammatical accuracy.

  • “To made him relax to avoid worry about my business request” → “just to make him feel at ease and not worry about any immediate business requests”

    Adjusted for smoother phrasing and grammatical correctness.