What I Said:

The passports have arrived. But you can’t believe that the deliveryman putted them in CaiNiao public rack. No any lock, no any cover. And I saw there were many “Important Identification”. It’s so dangerous, because anyone can get them without approval or authentication. I can’t understand these important things just so simple to make by official department and EMS. Yes, it’s not a personal behavior, they are sent from the government through EMS - an express delivery service certificated by China.

ChatGPT’s Revision:

Our passports finally arrived, but you won’t believe this—the deliveryman left them in a public CaiNiao rack with no lock or cover. There were many other ‘Important Identification’ documents there too. It’s so dangerous! Anyone could take them without approval or authentication. I can’t understand why such important documents are handled so casually by the official department and EMS. Yes, this wasn’t a personal mistake—they were sent through EMS, an express service certified by the Chinese government.

Fixes and Explanations:

  • “But you can’t believe that the deliveryman putted them in CaiNiao public rack” → “but you won’t believe this—the deliveryman left them in a public CaiNiao rack”

    Corrected “putted” to “left” and rephrased for smoother flow.

  • “No any lock, no any cover” → “with no lock or cover”

    Simplified and corrected phrasing for better grammar.

  • “And I saw there were many ‘Important Identification’” → “There were many other ‘Important Identification’ documents there too”

Added “other” to clarify the context and improve flow.

“It’s so dangerous, because anyone can get them without approval or authentication” → “It’s so dangerous! Anyone could take them without approval or authentication”

Adjusted for a conversational tone and urgency.

“I can’t understand these important things just so simple to make by official department and EMS” → “I can’t understand why such important documents are handled so casually by the official department and EMS”

Simplified for clarity and grammatical accuracy.

  • “they are sent from the government through EMS - an express delivery service certificated by China” → “they were sent through EMS, an express service certified by the Chinese government”

    Smoothed the phrasing and corrected “certificated” to “certified.”