What I Said:

There were so many courses for each accreditation of Atlassian partner. So I need to spend more, and more efforts to tackle them. Although I found that I can skip some courses but still needed to check many exercises. One more thing is that I was called as old man again. This time maybe because I wear a buff. The person who called me is a baby. Yes, a little baby, only can speak few words. Looks like that whatever I putted on the red coat, a cap or a buff, I’ve already looked like an old man at least in this village.

ChatGPT’s Revision:

There are so many courses for each Atlassian Partner accreditation, so I need to put in more and more effort to tackle them. Although I found I could skip some courses, I still had to complete many exercises. Oh, and I got called an ‘old man’ again—this time by a baby! Maybe it’s because I wore a buff. Whether it’s my red coat, a cap, or a buff, I guess I already look like an old man—at least in this village.”

Fixes and Explanations:

  • “So I need to spend more, and more efforts to tackle them” → “so I need to put in more and more effort to tackle them”

    Adjusted “spend more, and more efforts” to “put in more and more effort” for correct phrasing.

  • “Although I found that I can skip some courses but still needed to check many exercises” → “Although I found I could skip some courses, I still had to complete many exercises”

    Changed “can” to “could” for past tense consistency and rephrased for smoother flow.

  • “One more thing is that I was called as old man again” → “Oh, and I got called an ‘old man’ again”

    Simplified for conversational tone and removed unnecessary “as.”

  • “This time maybe because I wear a buff” → “This time by a baby! Maybe it’s because I wore a buff”

    Added “by a baby!” to emphasize humor and changed “wear” to “wore” for tense consistency.

  • “Looks like that whatever I putted on the red coat, a cap or a buff” → “Whether it’s my red coat, a cap, or a buff”

    Rephrased for better flow and corrected “putted on” to “put on.”

  • “I’ve already looked like an old man at least in this village” → “I guess I already look like an old man—at least in this village”

    “I guess” adds a conversational tone, and “look like” simplifies the phrasing.