What I Said:

I started working on the accreditation for our company. There was four need me to enroll them. I was gonna do from ITSM. And I thought it can be finished soon but a half of day later, I found I was too naive. It was not easy to maintain, need spend lots of days for each one. So I asked Yien to help me maintain them together.

ChatGPT’s Revision:

I started working on the accreditation for our company. There were four I needed to enroll in, and I planned to start with ITSM. I thought it would be quick, but after half a day, I realized I was too naive. Maintaining them isn’t easy—it’ll take several days for each. So, I asked Yien to help me handle them together.”

Fixes and Explanations:

  • “There was four need me to enroll them” → “There were four I needed to enroll in”

    Adjusted subject-verb agreement (“was” → “were”) and clarified “need me to enroll them” to “I needed to enroll in.”

  • “I was gonna do from ITSM” → “I planned to start with ITSM”

    “Planned to start with” is clearer and smoother than “gonna do from.”

  • “I thought it can be finished soon but a half of day later” → “I thought it would be quick, but after half a day”

    Changed “can” to “would” for correct tense, and “a half of day later” to “after half a day” for natural phrasing.

  • “I found I was too naive”

    Kept as is. It’s concise and conveys emotion well.

  • “It was not easy to maintain, need spend lots of days for each one” → “Maintaining them isn’t easy—it’ll take several days for each”

    Simplified the sentence for smoother flow and clarity.

  • “So I asked Yien to help me maintain them together” → “So, I asked Yien to help me handle them together”

    “Handle” fits better than “maintain” in this context.