What I Said:

I talked with my wife about how to earn money in the new year. All we felt social media might work on us. And we were gonna choose the topic of life after the lumber surgery. Because it was our real life. So we wouldn’t be strong stressful. And we might lock the people who are in recovery life, maybe we can impact some guys to live carefully.

ChatGPT’s Revision:

My wife and I talked about ways to earn money in the new year, and we felt social media might work for us. We’re thinking of sharing about life after lumbar surgery since it’s our real experience, so it wouldn’t feel too stressful. We might focus on people going through recovery, hoping to inspire them to live carefully and positively.

Fixes and Explanations:

  • “how to earn money in the new year” → “ways to earn money in the new year”

    “Ways to earn money” sounds more natural.

  • “All we felt social media might work on us” → “and we felt social media might work for us”

    “Work for us” is the correct phrasing.

  • “And we were gonna choose the topic of life after the lumber surgery” → “We’re thinking of sharing about life after lumbar surgery”

    “Thinking of sharing” is smoother, and “lumbar surgery” is the correct term.

  • “Because it was our real life. So we wouldn’t be strong stressful” → “since it’s our real experience, so it wouldn’t feel too stressful”

    Combined sentences for better flow, and corrected “strong stressful” to “too stressful.”

  • “And we might lock the people who are in recovery life” → “We might focus on people going through recovery”

    “Focus on” is a clearer and more natural way to describe targeting an audience.

  • “maybe we can impact some guys to live carefully” → “hoping to inspire them to live carefully and positively”

    “Impact some guys” is awkward; “inspire them” is more positive and natural.