What I Said:

I hosted a webinar of Huawei code arts, introduction, and discussion with the speaker. It was my first time to manage an online event. There was no watcher except a friend. I didn’t think that’s a bad starting. Because I wanted a thing is familiar with the procedure of this type of event, and I made it. On top of that, I didn’t share the event link to public through social media.

ChatGPT’s Revision:

I hosted a webinar about Huawei CodeArts, including an introduction and a discussion with the speaker. It was my first time managing an online event, and there was only one viewer—a friend. But I don’t see it as a bad start. My main goal was to get familiar with the process of hosting this kind of event, and I accomplished that. Plus, I didn’t share the event link publicly on social media, so it was more like a test run.

Fixes and Explanations:

  • “I hosted a webinar of Huawei code arts, introduction, and discussion with the speaker” → “I hosted a webinar about Huawei CodeArts, including an introduction and a discussion with the speaker”

    “About” is more appropriate than “of,” and “including” creates a smoother flow.

  • “It was my first time to manage an online event” → “It was my first time managing an online event”

    “Managing” is the correct gerund form here, replacing “to manage.”

  • “There was no watcher except a friend” → “There was only one viewer—a friend”

    “No watcher” is awkward; “only one viewer” is more natural.

  • “I didn’t think that’s a bad starting” → “But I don’t see it as a bad start”

    Simplified phrasing and corrected “starting” to “start.”

  • “Because I wanted a thing is familiar with the procedure of this type of event, and I made it” → “My main goal was to get familiar with the process of hosting this kind of event, and I accomplished that”

    Rewritten for clarity and grammatical accuracy.

  • “On top of that, I didn’t share the event link to public through social media” → “Plus, I didn’t share the event link publicly on social media”

    Simplified “didn’t share…to public” to “didn’t share…publicly” for correct usage.