What I Said:

I thought I finished for the solution of my client, But I had a mistake. The official developer document isn’t correct 100%. i’ve gotta continue to investigate deeper to find out the solution and other method. A whole day I was working on it, but no big progress.

ChatGPT’s Revision:

I thought I had finished the solution for my client, but I made a mistake. The official developer documentation isn’t 100% correct. I’ve gotta continue investigating to find the solution and explore other methods. I worked on it all day, but didn’t make much progress.

Fixes and Explanations:

  • “I thought I finished for the solution” should be “I thought I had finished the solution” (correct verb tense and preposition).

  • “But I had a mistake” can be rephrased as “but I made a mistake” (more natural phrasing).

  • “i’ve gotta continue to investigate deeper” should be “I’ve gotta continue investigating” (streamlined phrasing).

  • “developer document isn’t correct 100%” should be “developer documentation isn’t 100% correct” (more formal and accurate phrasing).

  • “no big progress” sounds a bit awkward; “didn’t make much progress” is clearer.

  • “To find out the solution and other method” sounds a little awkward. “To find the solution and explore other methods” is more natural.

  • The overall flow is fine, but using more concise phrasing would help make the message clearer.