What I Said:

I spent so many efforts to investigate a system error found in my client environment. He asked me help to resolve this failure yesterday, so I worked hardly until midnight, and at the early this morning I continued to solve this issue. On the top of that, I kept it designing a solution for their another requirement. It was not easy to make it.

ChatGPT’s Revision:

I put in a lot of effort to investigate a system error found in my client’s environment. They asked me for help to resolve the issue yesterday, so I worked hard until midnight. Early this morning, I continued working on it. On top of that, I was also designing a solution for another requirement they had. It wasn’t easy, but I got it done.

Fixes and Explanations:

  • “I spent so many efforts” should be “I put in a lot of effort” (more natural phrasing).

  • “worked hardly” should be “worked hard” (correct usage of “hard” as an adverb).

  • “at the early this morning” should be “early this morning” (no need for “the” here).

  • “kept it designing” sounds unnatural. “I was also designing” is clearer and more accurate.

  • “It was not easy to make it” can be simplified to “It wasn’t easy, but I got it done.”

  • “I continued to solve this issue” could be changed to “I continued working on it” to make it sound more natural.

  • “On top of that” is a great transition, but it’s better to follow it with “I was also designing a solution” to keep the sentence structure parallel.