What I Said:

William cried before we were just about to set out to handwriting lessons. Because he didn’t finished his homework and he known the teacher is not a person who can easy to agree with other’s explain. He kept crying until we met the teacher and the teacher talked with him about responsibility. I didn’t think that it’s a bad experience to William. He could learn how to schedule with priorities from it. Anyway today was Christmas Eve. He was so excited to wait for Santa. Actually the thing he was waiting for was Christmas gift.

ChatGPT’s Revision:

William cried just before we were about to head out for his handwriting lesson. He hadn’t finished his homework and knew that the teacher is strict about excuses. He kept crying until we met the teacher, who talked to him about responsibility. I don’t think it was a bad experience for William. He learned about prioritizing and scheduling from it. Anyway, today was Christmas Eve, and he was so excited, waiting for Santa. Actually, what he was really waiting for was his Christmas gift.

Fixes and Explanations:

  • “William cried before we were just about to set out to handwriting lessons” → “William cried just before we were about to head out for his handwriting lesson”

    “Just before” sounds more natural and less repetitive than “before we were just about to.” “Head out for” is a more common phrasing than “set out to.”

  • “Because he didn’t finished his homework” → “He hadn’t finished his homework”

    Corrected the verb tense for grammatical accuracy.

  • “he known the teacher is not a person who can easy to agree with other’s explain” → “and knew that the teacher is strict about excuses”

    Rephrased for clarity and better flow. “Known” should be “knew,” and “not a person who can easily agree with others’ explanations” sounds awkward, so simplified to “strict about excuses.”

  • “He kept crying until we met the teacher and the teacher talked with him about responsibility.” → “He kept crying until we met the teacher, who talked to him about responsibility.”

    Simplified the sentence for better flow. “Talked to” is more natural than “talked with.”

  • “I didn’t think that it’s a bad experience to William” → “I don’t think it was a bad experience for William”

    Rephrased for clarity and grammatical accuracy.

  • “He could learn how to schedule with priorities from it” → “He learned about prioritizing and scheduling from it”

    Refined to sound more natural and fluent in English.

  • “Anyway today was Christmas Eve. He was so excited to wait for Santa.” → “Anyway, today was Christmas Eve, and he was so excited, waiting for Santa.”

    Added a comma for clarity and smoother flow.

  • “Actually the thing he was waiting for was Christmas gift.” → “Actually, what he was really waiting for was his Christmas gift.”

    Rephrased for clarity and to match the conversational tone.