What I Said:

Since I completed a sharing session at weekend, I can start work on Nexus mirror configuration for my client. The customer scenario is define an NPM or Maven repository URL which users can access it without authentication in their internal network environment, and if there is no packages in the local server, the Nexus would access aliyun mirror to download packages, although it was not complex, but I still spent half day efforts to validate it and write down the procedure to a document.

ChatGPT’s Revision:

Since I completed a sharing session over the weekend, I’ve started working on Nexus mirror configuration for my client. The customer scenario involves defining an NPM or Maven repository URL that users can access without authentication in their internal network. If the requested packages aren’t available on the local server, Nexus will fetch them from an Alibaba Cloud (Aliyun) mirror. Although it wasn’t complex, I still spent half a day validating the setup and documenting the procedure.

Fixes and Explanations:

  • “Since I completed a sharing session at weekend” → “Since I completed a sharing session over the weekend”

    “Over the weekend” is the correct phrase in English.

  • “I can start work on Nexus mirror configuration for my client” → “I’ve started working on Nexus mirror configuration for my client”

    “I’ve started working” is more appropriate for the context and timeline.

  • “The customer scenario is define an NPM or Maven repository URL which users can access it without authentication” → “The customer scenario involves defining an NPM or Maven repository URL that users can access without authentication”

    Rephrased for grammatical accuracy and smoother flow.

  • “in their internal network environment, and if there is no packages in the local server, the Nexus would access aliyun mirror to download packages” → “in their internal network. If the requested packages aren’t available on the local server, Nexus will fetch them from an Alibaba Cloud (Aliyun) mirror”

    Split into two sentences for clarity. Added “requested packages” for context and used “fetch” for a more technical tone.

  • “although it was not complex, but I still spent half day efforts to validate it and write down the procedure to a document” → “Although it wasn’t complex, I still spent half a day validating the setup and documenting the procedure”

    Simplified phrasing for better readability and corrected “write down the procedure to a document” to “documenting the procedure.”