What I Said:

We planned to enjoy hot spring last night. But we didn’t take our swim suites. So we wanted to ask the price of swim suite, and if the price was good for us, we might buy them. But the price was tremendous, it was huge gap with our thoughts. More, and more, and more than the price of hot spring. So we gave in immediately. After breakfast today, we leaved the hotel, two hours driving again, I was so tired we were home. I just went to bed and when I opened my eyes I found the time was two hours later.

ChatGPT’s Revision:

We planned to enjoy the hot spring last night, but we didn’t bring our swimsuits. So, we decided to ask about the price, thinking we might buy them if it was reasonable. However, the price was outrageous—much higher than we expected and even more expensive than the hot spring itself! We gave up immediately. After breakfast today, we left the hotel and drove for two hours to get home. I was so tired that I went straight to bed. When I opened my eyes, I realized I had slept for two hours.

Fixes and Explanations:

  • “We planned to enjoy hot spring last night” → “We planned to enjoy the hot spring last night”

    Added “the” for grammatical correctness.

  • “But we didn’t take our swim suites” → “but we didn’t bring our swimsuits”

    Corrected spelling from “swim suites” to “swimsuits” and replaced “take” with “bring” for natural phrasing.

  • “So we wanted to ask the price of swim suite, and if the price was good for us, we might buy them” → “So, we decided to ask about the price, thinking we might buy them if it was reasonable”

    Simplified for clarity and natural flow.

  • “But the price was tremendous, it was huge gap with our thoughts” → “However, the price was outrageous—much higher than we expected”

    “Outrageous” fits better than “tremendous,” and “huge gap with our thoughts” was rephrased for clarity.

  • “More, and more, and more than the price of hot spring” → “and even more expensive than the hot spring itself!”

    Simplified and clarified for natural phrasing.

  • “So we gave in immediately” → “We gave up immediately”

    “Gave up” is the correct expression here; “gave in” implies agreement or submission.

  • “After breakfast today, we leaved the hotel, two hours driving again, I was so tired we were home” → “After breakfast today, we left the hotel and drove for two hours to get home”

    Corrected “leaved” to “left” and improved sentence structure for clarity.

  • “I was so tired we were home” → “I was so tired that I went straight to bed”

    Rephrased for grammatical accuracy and better flow.

  • “I just went to bed and when I opened my eyes I found the time was two hours later” → “When I opened my eyes, I realized I had slept for two hours”

    Simplified for better flow and natural phrasing.