What I Said:

I have completed to collect some videos of screen recording for my sharing. It’s not a easy work. There is still a video collection for our custom tool. And I found this tool needs to be updated because of some service errors. That would be my focusing work next week.

ChatGPT’s Revision:

I’ve finished collecting some screen recording videos for my sharing session. It wasn’t an easy task. I still need to collect a video for our custom tool, but I found it needs an update due to some service errors. Fixing that will be my focus next week.

Fixes and Explanations:

  • “I have completed to collect some videos of screen recording” → “I’ve finished collecting some screen recording videos”

    “I’ve finished collecting” is more natural and concise than “completed to collect.”

  • “It’s not a easy work” → “It wasn’t an easy task”

    “Wasn’t” is used here because the task is completed. “Task” fits better than “work” in this context, and “an easy task” corrects the article usage (“a easy” → “an easy”).

  • “There is still a video collection for our custom tool” → “I still need to collect a video for our custom tool”

    Rephrased for clarity and to avoid awkward phrasing like “video collection.”

  • “And I found this tool needs to be updated because of some service errors” → “but I found it needs an update due to some service errors”

    Combined with the previous sentence for smoother flow and replaced “needs to be updated” with “needs an update” for conciseness.

  • “That would be my focusing work next week” → “Fixing that will be my focus next week”

    Rephrased to sound more natural and conversational. “Focus” is more appropriate than “focusing work.”