What I Said:

I have received the world map which I bought an English version. I can’t wait to put it on the wall near my desk. I have to use a magnifying glass to see the text in the map. Because they are too small. The thing I did first is that I try to find my country, my friends’ country. I can feel the distance between us by visual. On this map, my country is not the center of the world, instead of Europe and Africa. It makes sense more, because it’s mapped with timezones.

ChatGPT’s Revision:

I received the English version of the world map I ordered. I couldn’t wait to put it on the wall near my desk. The text on the map is so small I had to use a magnifying glass to read it! The first thing I did was try to find my country and my friends’ countries. Seeing the distance between us visually was amazing. On this map, my country isn’t at the center of the world — Europe and Africa are. That makes more sense because the map aligns with time zones.

Fixes and Explanations:

  • “I have received the world map which I bought an English version” → “I received the English version of the world map I ordered”

    Simplified for better flow and clarity. The phrase “I bought an English version” is redundant since you already mentioned ordering it.

  • “I can’t wait to put it on the wall near my desk”

    Kept this sentence as is since it’s clear and natural.

  • “I have to use a magnifying glass to see the text in the map. Because they are too small.” → “The text on the map is so small I had to use a magnifying glass to read it!”

    Combined the two sentences for better flow and added emphasis with “so small.”

  • “The thing I did first is that I try to find my country, my friends’ country.” → “The first thing I did was try to find my country and my friends’ countries.”

    Rephrased for smoother flow and grammatical accuracy. Adjusted “friends’ country” to “friends’ countries” for consistency.

  • “I can feel the distance between us by visual.” → “Seeing the distance between us visually was amazing.”

    Rephrased for a more natural tone and added “was amazing” to express excitement.

  • “On this map, my country is not the center of the world, instead of Europe and Africa.” → “On this map, my country isn’t at the center of the world—Europe and Africa are.”

    Simplified and rephrased for clarity. “Isn’t at the center” is more conversational.

  • “It makes sense more, because it’s mapped with timezones.” → “That makes more sense because the map aligns with time zones.”

    Rephrased for a smoother, more natural conclusion.