What I Said:

My kid has been sick. Keep coughing. I worried about that if his temperature changes higher. It seems that there is no good progress of his status even we have taken some medicine. I might take him to see a doctor tomorrow unless he will be good tonight.

ChatGPT’s Revision:

My kid has been sick and keeps coughing. I’m worried that his temperature might go higher. It seems like there’s been no improvement in his condition, even though we’ve given him some medicine. I might take him to the doctor tomorrow unless he gets better tonight.

Fixes and Explanations:

  • “My kid has been sick. Keep coughing.” → “My kid has been sick and keeps coughing.”

    Combined the two sentences for smoother flow. “Keeps coughing” is a more natural way to describe an ongoing action.

  • “I worried about that if his temperature changes higher.” → “I’m worried that his temperature might go higher.”

    Corrected tense from past to present, as you’re speaking about a current concern. “Might go higher” is more natural than “changes higher.”

  • “It seems that there is no good progress of his status even we have taken some medicine.” → “It seems like there’s been no improvement in his condition, even though we’ve given him some medicine.”

    Rephrased for better clarity and grammar: “no good progress” is less natural in English, so “no improvement” fits better. Also, “given him some medicine” is a more common expression than “taken some medicine.”

  • “I might take him to see a doctor tomorrow unless he will be good tonight.” → “I might take him to the doctor tomorrow unless he gets better tonight.”

    Rephrased for smoother phrasing. “Gets better” is more natural than “will be good.”