What I Said:

Finally complete data migration, more than 4TB videos about cartoons for my kid. I don’t remember how many days have been spent to used to do this work. It’s really a big project for me, at least last one week. Previously I stored this data in Baidu. I subscribe it about 180 RMB per year. Now I can cancel it and then use Quake, a product supported by Alibaba, no external price since we subscribe 88 VIP in TaoBao, this VIP plan contains Quake subscription.

ChatGPT’s Revision:

Finally finished migrating over 4TB of cartoon videos for my kid. I can’t even remember how many days I spent on this—it’s been at least a week. It was a huge project for me!
Previously, I stored this data in Baidu and paid about 180 RMB per year for it. Now, I can cancel that subscription and use Quake, a product by Alibaba. There’s no extra cost since it’s included in the 88 VIP plan on Taobao, which we already subscribe to.

Fixes and Explanations:

  • “Finally complete data migration” → “Finally finished migrating”

    “Finished migrating” is grammatically correct and natural in American English.

  • “more than 4TB videos about cartoons for my kid” → “over 4TB of cartoon videos for my kid”

    “Over 4TB of cartoon videos” sounds more polished and concise.

  • “I don’t remember how many days have been spent to used to do this work” → “I can’t even remember how many days I spent on this”

    Simplified for clarity and natural phrasing.

  • “It’s really a big project for me, at least last one week” → “It was a huge project for me—it’s been at least a week”

    “Huge project” is more conversational, and the phrase was restructured for better flow.

  • “Previously I stored this data in Baidu. I subscribe it about 180 RMB per year” → “Previously, I stored this data in Baidu and paid about 180 RMB per year for it”

    Combined sentences and corrected tense for smoother phrasing.

  • “Now I can cancel it and then use Quake, a product supported by Alibaba, no external price since we subscribe 88 VIP in TaoBao, this VIP plan contains Quake subscription” → “Now, I can cancel that subscription and use Quake, a product by Alibaba. There’s no extra cost since it’s included in the 88 VIP plan on Taobao, which we already subscribe to”

    Reorganized for clarity, corrected grammar, and improved flow.