What I Said:

My wife is sick because she spent all of her power this week for the case. This time we won the contract. Although we didn’t get much money from this contract — maybe can’t cover the efforts for preparation, but it is still a good process.

ChatGPT’s Revision:

My wife is sick because she gave all her energy this week to the case. This time, we won the contract. Although we didn’t make much money from it — maybe not even enough to cover the preparation efforts — it’s still progress and a step forward.

Fixes and Explanations:

  • “she spent all of her power this week for the case” → “she gave all her energy this week to the case”

    “Gave all her energy” is more natural than “spent all of her power,” which sounds awkward in English.

  • “This time we won the contract”

    This part is good, so no changes were needed.

  • “Although we didn’t get much money from this contract” → “Although we didn’t make much money from it”

    “Make much money” is more conversational than “get much money.” Simplified “this contract” to “it” for better flow.

  • “maybe can’t cover the efforts for preparation” → “maybe not even enough to cover the preparation efforts”

    Rephrased for better grammar and smoother phrasing.

  • “but it is still a good process” → “it’s still progress and a step forward”

    “Progress and a step forward” feels more positive and impactful than “a good process.”