What I Said:

I got my package of a microphone which can be putted on the coat. I’m gonna take some vlog or sharing video using this wireless microphone. It will be good to record my voice. I spend 50 RMB to buy it, it’s not an expensive product, I don’t wanna spend lot of money to recording, because no one knows how long this work can keep going. Good luck to me.

ChatGPT’s Revision:

I just received my package—a microphone that can be clipped onto a coat. I’m planning to use this wireless mic for vlogs or sharing videos. It’s great for recording my voice. I only spent 50 RMB on it, so it’s not expensive. I didn’t want to spend too much on recording gear since I’m unsure how long I’ll stick with this. Wish me luck!

Fixes and Explanations:

  • “of a microphone which can be putted on the coat” → “a microphone that can be clipped onto a coat”

    “Putted” is incorrect; the correct verb here is “clipped.” Also, “the coat” is too specific—it’s better to generalize as “a coat.”

  • “I’m gonna take some vlog or sharing video” → “I’m planning to use this wireless mic for vlogs or sharing videos”

    Rephrased for clarity and proper grammar. “Take some vlog” is awkward; “use for vlogs” works better.

  • “It will be good to record my voice” → “It’s great for recording my voice”

    Shortened and made more conversational.

  • “I spend 50 RMB to buy it, it’s not an expensive product” → “I only spent 50 RMB on it, so it’s not expensive”

    Corrected tense (“spend” to “spent”) and improved sentence flow.

  • “I don’t wanna spend lot of money to recording” → “I didn’t want to spend too much on recording gear”

    “Lot of money to recording” is awkward; “too much on recording gear” is more natural.

  • “because no one knows how long this work can keep going” → “since I’m unsure how long I’ll stick with this”

    Simplified for a smoother and more natural tone.

  • “Good luck to me” → “Wish me luck!”

    “Wish me luck” is a more conversational way to say this.