What I Said:

I am trying to install a Confluence in a cloud light server to help my friend, but it is strange that the Confluence app has always crashed. Even it has two cores and 4G memories. I’m confused because I remember that I have installed Jira and Confluence in a 4G memories machine, My friend’s light server is in Tencent cloud and named the lighthouse. looks like they are different performance even if they have the same resource.

ChatGPT’s Revision:

I’m trying to install Confluence on a cloud light server to help my friend, but it keeps crashing. The server has two cores and 4GB of memory, which confuses me because I’ve previously installed Jira and Confluence on a 4GB machine without issues. My friend’s light server is on Tencent Cloud and is called a ‘Lighthouse.’ It seems the performance is different even with the same resources.

Fixes and Explanations:

  • “a Confluence” → “Confluence”

    Confluence is a proper noun and doesn’t need “a.”

  • “it is strange that the Confluence app has always crashed” → “but it keeps crashing”

    “Keeps crashing” is a more natural way to describe ongoing issues.

  • “Even it has two cores and 4G memories” → “The server has two cores and 4GB of memory”

    “4G memories” should be “4GB of memory” for correct terminology. Simplified the sentence structure for clarity.

  • “I remember that I have installed Jira and Confluence in a 4G memories machine” → “I’ve previously installed Jira and Confluence on a 4GB machine without issues”

    Shortened for a smoother flow and corrected “4G memories” to “4GB of memory.”

  • “My friend’s light server is in Tencent cloud and named the light app server” → “My friend’s light server is on Tencent Cloud and is called a ‘Light App Server’”

    “In Tencent Cloud” should be “on Tencent Cloud,” and “named” works better as “is called.”

  • “looks like they are different performance even if they have the same resource” → “It seems the performance is different even with the same resources”

    Adjusted for grammatical accuracy and natural phrasing.