What I Said:

I bought a new domain for my personal. Have made it works these days. So now, for this category can through https://tweet.willshi.space to review. Another thing is that I’m gonna migrate my blog from Jekyll to Hugo. I love Hugo this name, he is a great artist. This work will be a new journey.

ChatGPT’s Revision:

I bought a new domain for my personal site and have been getting it set up these past few days. Now, you can review posts in this category at https://tweet.willshi.space . Also, I’m planning to migrate my blog from Jekyll to Hugo. I love the name Hugo – it reminds me of a great artist. This project will be a new journey.

Fixes and Explanations:

  • “for my personal” → “for my personal site”

“Personal” alone sounds incomplete. “Personal site” clarifies the purpose.

  • “Have made it works these days” → “and have been getting it set up these past few days”

This rephrasing sounds smoother and more natural.

  • “So now, for this category can through…” → “Now, you can review posts in this category at…”

Simplifies the phrasing for clearer understanding.

  • “I love Hugo this name, he is a great artist” → “I love the name Hugo—it reminds me of a great artist”

This connects “Hugo” with the idea of a well-known artist for a more natural flow.